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Dark Walk In The Park

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Title - Dark Walk in the Park

Every day I think of you
And how things could have been
Hoping you are doing well
Not fighting yourself for time
Can't you tell I miss you
Don't you know I Love you
And want you to be happy

It's a Dark Walk in the Park
Here without you
Wanting to see you smile
It's a Dark Walk
Praying to all my Gods
Waiting for you to understand my Love
It's a Dark Walk
A Dark Walk in the Park

Time is passing us by
And no one seems any better
We don't see the love all around us
Nature we're given to survive
Can't you see I miss you
Don't you know I Love you
And want you to enjoy the stars

It's a Dark Walk in the Park
Here without you
Wanting to see you smile
It's a Dark Walk
Praying to all my Gods
Waiting for you to understand my Love
It's a Dark Walk
A Dark Walk in the Park

I don't have many answers
But you need to know I love you
I want to hold your hand
Make all of your pain go away
Can't you tell that I miss you
Don't you see I Love You
And gave you all of my heart

It's a Dark Walk in the Park
Here without you
Wanting to see you smile
It's a Dark Walk
Praying to all my Gods
Waiting for you to understand my Love
It's a Dark Walk
A Dark Walk in the Park

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George, that's actually some brilliant riffing.

 

You might have noticed I rarely say anything in the "member creations" forum, and that's because if I don't have anything nice to say, I don't say anything.

 

I'm commenting because this is pretty good.

 

You really should try to hammer it into an actual song.

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It's good! It reminds me a bit of Opeth (how they used to be). I don't know if it's the harmonies or the sound or both, but you should definitely make it into a song.

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Dark Walk in the Park....nice melody...guitar work sounds a little like Metallica to me...nice!

 

Be sure to share the lyrics when you get them written!  Please keep practicing!

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It's good! It reminds me a bit of Opeth (how they used to be). I don't know if it's the harmonies or the sound or both, but you should definitely make it into a song.

Sam,

I'm glad my song held your interest and especially glad that you liked it. I have several songs that I'm working on, but this one is my favorite.

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Dark Walk in the Park means the most to me...i wrote the lyric for someone i truely love and miss.

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On 10/10/2016 at 11:53 PM, Serious Sam said:

It's good! It reminds me a bit of Opeth (how they used to be). I don't know if it's the harmonies or the sound or both, but you should definitely make it into a song.

Sam,

Sure. Feel free to sing to them! i'd love to hear Dark Walk in the Park with my lyrics...they mean a lot to me. I have no problem with you singing to them. Please do! Remember though...please share your results.

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Bikers Holiday (lyrics)

Call up All of your friends
Gather for a fast and furious ride
Down paths to natures hidden gems
Within this beautifully created land

It’s a Bikers Holiday
Riding off into the sun
We’ll all meet together
Going to have some fun
Be with those we love
It’s a Bikers Holiday

We’ll figure out this world's problems
While riding on two wheels
Rolling down our roads and trails
Enjoying the scenes all the way

It’s a Bikers Holiday
Riding off into the sun
We’ll all meet together
Going to have some fun
Be with those we love
It’s a Bikers Holiday

Another ride from the heart
Another day to share with you
We're going the long way home
These rides should never end

It’s a Bikers Holiday
Riding off into the sun
We’ll all meet together
Going to have some fun
Be with those we love
It’s a Bikers Holiday

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Corruption & Politics (lyrics)

Politics in Our lives
Are not fair or just
We work and Slave
To maintain our existence
Having governments rule us
Everyday

Corruption & Politics
Leaders Using Our strengths
To make themselves Rich
Ruining Our Countries
And selling us out
Corruption & Politics

We need to fix Our World
Work with each other
End our misery
Raise each other up
We don't need politicians
We can think for ourselves
 
Corruption & Politics
Leaders Using Our strengths
To make themselves Rich
Ruining Our Countries
And selling us out
Corruption & Politics
 
Rules can be defeated
We will put you out
Make you work with us
Begin to earn your living
As it is meant to be
For now and in our future
 
Corruption & Politics
Leaders Use Our strengths
To make themselves Rich
Ruining Our Countries
And selling our Souls
Corruption & Politics

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Rain On Your Love (lyrics)

When I first met you
I knew you were the one
Detailed, confident, and smart
No one can compare to you

I Want to Rain on your love
And watch it grow
Into many beautiful flowers
You'll be willing to show

You have all the answers
To questions I'm not allowed to give
So now we are distant...very far apart
Why does my love hurt you so bad?

I Got to Rain on your love
And hope it grows
Into many beautiful flowers
You'll be willing to show

Our endings will be written
However Gods may choose
But We are lions in the stars
It is time to fix our broken lives

I Rain on your love
And watch it grow
Into many beautiful flowers
You will show

Let it rain...

 

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Love Goes Away (lyrics)

 

We can't know our future

And our love changes fast

One day we're happy

The next we lose everything

How do we survive

And forget about love?

 

Love goes away

There's nothing anyone can do

I must move on

Not think of her

Love goes away

It just disappears

 

We hurt and we heal

Lean on our friends

And learn to become better people

Heartbreak takes its toll

While we continue moving on

Trying to repair our broken Soul

 

Love goes away

There's nothing anyone can do

I must move on

Not think of her

Love goes away

She just disappears

 

We're only human

And deal with our feelings

Love hurts us to our core

So let Love go...

Just let Love go!!

Mend your broken heart

 

Love goes away

There's nothing anyone can do

We must move on

I'll not think of her

Love goes away

She just disappears

 

 

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March of an Alien God

We go it alone in this world
No one is here to help us
Life and time...pain and suffering
Everything seems so cruel

The march of an Alien God
Proceeds across our hearts
Gods will have their way
We must fight to do our best
Against The march of an Alien God
 
There is no true Love
We can't count on anyone
I'm completely lost
It is my task to find the key
To unlock my forbidden love

The march of an Alien God
Proceeds across my heart
Gods will have their way
I must fight to do my best
Against The march of an Alien God
 
Never quit on yourself
Don't give into despair
Our God will reward us
Nature is a blessed gift
Have hope in Love

The march of an Alien God
Proceeds into our hearts
Gods will have their way
We must always do our best
For the God of Mother Earth

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George, this stuff is brilliant. I really think you should put out an album on bandcamp or something. I love backdoor politics especially. Save this world. Yes. We will save this world. All of us together. We don't need to wait for politics to save the world. We can do it ourselves.

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On 2/28/2017 at 3:12 AM, Serious Sam said:

George, this stuff is brilliant. I really think you should put out an album on bandcamp or something. I love backdoor politics especially. Save this world. Yes. We will save this world. All of us together. We don't need to wait for politics to save the world. We can do it ourselves.

I'm sure I will eventually have enough songs to make a record...but I'm not a hugely smart man. I know nothing about making a record...I believe eugenia could do it...such a smart young lady! just not sure i could produce a record... I'd need lots of help.

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Producing a record is one of those scary phrases industry invented to make you believe you need a studio to make a record :P In all honesty, in this day and age there is no reason for professional studios. Like, at all. I have no idea why people go into studios anymore. Google altairograph and listen to my metal songs. Composed in Melody Assistant and done with the sounds of Guitar Pro 6. Total cost: About 100 dollars. Cost of a good microphone: At most 200 dollars. Your guitar and amplifier cost more than my entire setup. 

 

And yes I know, not everybody is a multimedia talent and not everybody has been composing since they were 15 years old bla bla bla nonsense. People are just uninformed (like you), believe the industry blindly (basically most active famous bands) or they are spoiled brats who have no clue how hard work is even spelled (*cough* PARAMORE and its evil brethren *cough*).

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Thank you Sam! I will check out these titles you have given me. I have a friend who will help me with recording...and he has various software he uses. I just have to wait until he gets his office cleaned out....might take awhile...he's a busy man.

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The Sun Will Shine

 

I woke up this morning

And knew my day would go right

I was the man with a plan

Positive attitude all the way

What more can be said!

 

The Sun will shine on me

There is love in my heart

No one can take it away

Always be yourself...who you are

The Sun will shine

 

I have a dream to keep alive

Someone to lighten my life

I know for certain

What I intend to do

No one can change my desire

 

The Sun will shine on me

There is love in my heart

No one can take it away

Always be yourself...who you are

The Sun will shine

 

Goodbye and Hello

My Laughing and sharing friend

Smiles and love to you always

Nothing else I'll ever need

I have music to give you

 

The Sun will shine on us

Love is in our hearts

Let no one take it away

The Sun will shine

 

 

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What's Your Problem (lyrics)

 

You think you know me so well

Better look at yourself

Solve your anger

Why do you hate so much?

You can change your song

 

What's Your Problem

You want answers

To all your questions...So Very Deep

What's Your problem

Find the solutions

To Your Depressions...it's not that easy

 

Don't give up on friends

Do what you need to do

You should not accept

Losing an innocent love

Forgive everyone

 

What's Your Problem

You want answers

To all your questions...So Very Deep

What's Your problem

Find the solutions

To Your Depressions...it's not that easy

 

We move on with life

It's what we all must do

Work hard for change

And forgive our imperfections

Our friendship didn't have to end!

 

What's Your Problem

You want answers

To all your questions...So Very Deep

What's Your problem

Find the solutions

To Your Depressions...it's not that easy

 

 

 

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That's really good. I'm glad you are still making music. It sounds a bit like something in between Metallica and AC/DC.

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Yes...I am...but I'm trying to learn songs for a friend of mine. He's in a band that plays a lot of different styles of music. Mostly well known cover songs. They call themselves Covered In Jelly. I have a song of my own that I plan to share on here sometime soon...it just takes a lot of time to learn these cover songs. I can do God of Thunder -Kiss, Born To Be Wild - Steppenwolf, Destroyer - The Kinks, Gone Away - The Offspring, Zombie - The Cranberries, I Fought the Law - The Clash, and Paranoid - Black Sabbath. That's pretty good variety.

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Start The Ending

It's a song about technology and how we must not let it rule us. There are much more important things.

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Deleted Post of my attempt to create guitar for Laura's Voices. Didn't do her song justice. Nice song Laura!!

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Start The Ending

 

Many warnings have been given

Written by ancient alien Gods

What if ALL religions are true?

Could we comprehend that?

 

(chorus)

Start the ending

Re-write it how you want

Forget the Apocalypse

Make the future bright starlight

Love every living thing

It IS the answer

 

Why are we progressing

At this unbelievable rate?

Could it be our ending?

Is destruction our truest fate?

 

Start the ending

Re-write it how you want

Forget the Apocalypse

Make the future bright starlight

Love every living thing

It IS the answer

 

We're becoming electronic machines

We have to change this path

How long before we're not human?

Can’t let it happen!

 

Start the ending

Re-write it how you want

Forget the Apocalypse

Make the future bright starlight

Love EVERY LIVING THING

It IS the answer

 

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Not our best effort...but a good original song written by Albert Miller...former lead singer of the band.

Knife or Fire

The choice was made, he’ll regret it

Regret will only burn now if you let it

My brother’s gone, chasing desires

Get him out now question: knife or fire?

 

It’s on this road, where no man goes

That he’ll be lost for good

With gold in tow and feeling low

Does fate smile on you?

Or will it take you too?

 

The proud stand tall, on pride’s foundation

I can’t remember the terms of our altercation

The nights are rough, the days are dire

Get him out now question: knife or fire?

 

It’s on this road, where no man goes

That he’ll be lost for good

With gold in tow and feeling low

Does fate smile on you?

Or will it take you too?

 

Welcome home, we’ve been expecting

You lost all the gold that you’ve been collecting

Not so fast, you forget your priors

You owe me blood now question, knife or fire?

 

It’s on this road, where no man goes

That he’ll be lost for good

With gold in tow and feeling low

Does fate smile on you?

Or will it take you too?

 

After all that you’ve been through

I’d want fire too.

 

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